Dear Jeyamohan
The introduction of Neerkolam when the King realizes that "Agam" has nothing to do with "Udal"
and
the liberation he received creates the foundation for the upcoming
chapters where the Pandavas have to live in disguise. Each one of the
chapters is fascinating and I felt walking with the Pandavas, feeling
the thirst, heat, forest, and the changing landscape. Conversation with
the Sage Damanar who advise the Pandavas on bringing out the hidden
forms out helps the reader to understand the link between the Intro and
the extension of Neerkolam that is shaping.
Pandavas
decide to take the different roles and the "Avatar" they prefer is
great. Needless to say, your writing is a painting by words. At the same
time, Panchali's feelings and the way she adjusts
and Dharma's
anguish splash in between the Kolam. Bhima, the unpretentious warrior
subtly shows his love by taking care of Panchali. Arjuna, Nakula and
Sahadev works in unison with their end goal in mind to complete the 13
years - great siblings team bound by love and respect to Dharma.
Special
mention are the small characters like the "virali" riding on a donkey
or the Sudhars or the monkeys who provide that colorful brilliance to
the Neerkolam.
As usual, I am amazed at your tireless monumental work. This NeerKolam will remain for eternity.
Thank you.
Warm regards