Dear Jeyamohan
The story is touching grandiose
heights, with the description of Palhika's clans. I am awestruck to
think how much efforts you are putting into weaving this grand tapestry
with words aka gems.
Your imagination combined with history
and the amazing Interpretation of the nuances of each character make
this as a sequel to Vyasa's great epic.
Thru
Purisiravas you aptly describe Draupati's prowess, inner strength and
her desire to be like Kali Ma and how she express it that makes her
beautiful.
In chapter 22 you start
with Palhikar' travels. But, in chapter 23 princess Devikai helps with
the journey. Am I missing something?
Is
Saibyapuri today's Afghanistan or Iran? If they are traveling towards
Multan that is towards East, they must have started somewhere west of
Multan but I could not figure out the precise region.
Thank you. Safe travels.
Warm regards,
Sobana
